Thursday, 3 September 2015

Writing Prove it

 Why kids shouldn't have to wear school uniform

Kids should not have to wear school uniform.  Adults don't have to wear a uniform so why do we?  Don't you want us to express ourselves as individuals?  Also they never have a top, pants and a jersey that are our exact size! If they're not the right size they get uncomfortable which is another reason that school uniforms are bad.  I understand they make us look united but that's a different story.

The highlighted text is what I've been learning this term.  This term I was in Spelling and this is what we learnt was 
- Proof read
- Read it aloud 
- Read it backwards
- Spell check 
- Piece by piece 

I think I reached Extended Abstract because I can make something to show others how to do it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Samara
    I really liked that piece of your writing. I also liked how you filled your entry and exit ticket in. I agree that you are at Extended Abstract.